Wrong:1) Page 31, four lines below equation (2), "... a bin with , E and N ..."
2) Page 33, four lines below equation (3), "... photons of EN1 ..."
3) Page 34, Fig. 5 (a), (b), (c)
4) Page 35, the sentence just below equation (6), "... are independent of rj and Drj ..."
Right:1) "... a bin with E and N...".
2) "... photons of EN-1 ...".
3) there should be a rectangular bar (black color) near the arrow, as shown below.
4) "... are independent of rj and Δrj ...".